Self-Introduction

Dear Prof Blackstone,

I am writing this to further introduce myself given that our interaction in class is limited. My name is Pang Yong Xun, and I am currently a year 1 engineering student attending your effective communication module.

Before deciding to pursue further studies in a Bachelor in Mechanical Engineering, I was a graduate from Singapore Polytechnic with a diploma in aeronautical engineering. Having graduated back in 2017, I had decided that a career in the aerospace sector was not my cup of tea. Being fascinated with ground-based engineering projects since young, I believe that a degree in mechanical engineering would provide me with the skills to be able to pursue a career in the automotive sector.

In regards to weakness in communicating with others, I often find myself experiencing difficulties in oral and written communication. I find it difficult to explain my points in a clear and concise manner, and that has resulted in my lack of confidence to present ideas to large groups of people. However, when it comes down to interacting with others in work environments, I believe my stint as a clerk while in in the army has equipped me with valuable experience. In this case, I had to communicate between various groups of people to ensure smooth operation of day-to-day activities. This has shown me that communication across all levels are equally important.

Hopefully, this module will not only improve both my written and oral communication skills, but will also allow me to better myself. I am looking forward to attending your classes and gaining more insight from you.

updated 17 Feb 2020

4 thoughts on “Self-Introduction

  1. Hi Yong Xun! This is Sean from your effective communication class. what do you mean by communication across all levels when you were serving as a clerk in the army?

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  2. Dear Yong Xun,

    Thanks very much for this letter of intro. It’s clear, concise and quite complete in the information you present. I appreciate the detail you give as you discuss each of the points for the assignment. This is particularly true for the bits about your comm skills weakness and strength and for your developing interest in engineering. You probably could add more specific info on how you want to further develop your skills in this module.

    In terms of language use, this is quite a fluent letter, but there are a few items to take note of:

    1. punctuation, capitalization
    — with a Diploma in Aeronautical Engineering./a degree in Mechanical Engineering > ?
    — serving in the Army > ?
    — Best Regards, > ?

    2. verb tense consistency
    — Often, I receive feedback that my points were not explained clearly, > ?

    I look forward to learning more about your this term.

    Cheers,

    Brad

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    1. Good day Prof Brad,

      My group has commented on my post on a earlier date. However, due to approval issues on wordpress, they were not approved until recently. Thank you for the concern.

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